[英语]请教高手英文翻译哪里还可以改进?
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Today is my grandma's birthday.Although I did not go there, I was presented a feast for the mouth,especially my favourite Tangculiji.And Songshuguiyu which I can seldom eat.120yuan for each.If I were to buy it I would be very sorry.Haha,and my favourite drinks brought by my sister.Being happy.My sister has gone just now,taking a light to Dalian,which is Sunnan's homeland.How do I know?I heard it from my dear disciple.Haha,I believe my sister will have fun.
Today is my grandma's birthday.Although I did not go there(go to her's 去奶奶家,要讲清楚), I was presented a feast for the mouth(这句我理解很困难,谁给你带回来的?直接说XX brought me some yummies of the feast不就完了?),especially my favourite Tangculiji(拜托,糖醋里脊也不是这样说的吧?Fried Pork with Sugar and Venegar似乎醋是这么拼写的吧?), And(and) Songshuguiyu(同理,改为Steamed Mandarin Fish ) which I can(多余去掉) seldom eat.(+It's )120yuan for each.If I were to buy (pay for)it I would be very sorry.Haha,and my favourite drinks (+were )brought(+back) by my (+younger )sister, being happy.She has gone just now,taking a light(flight) to Dalian,(改为
the hometown of Sunnan).How do I know?I heard it from my dear disciple(这词太重了,换为little buddy).Haha,I believe my sister will (+surely )have fun.